Opinions

So, I decided to send in an entry for The Writers' Union of Canada's Postcard Story Competition.  Anyone want to read what I have and give me some feedback?  The deadline is the 14th (I know – talk about procrastination), so I need to have it postmarked by then.

I've come to the realizations that (1) 250 words are not much at all to tell an entire story in and (2) short-short stories like that are more of a snapshot than a fully fleshed out plotline. At least, I hope!